I've now completed the second draft of my script, making a few small changes here and there. My biggest worry at the moment is that I just won't have enough time to do it all. There is a chance that I may have to cut out some scenes, however I still think I'll film them. If I do need to cut down on the length of the film, I can do that in the editing process. Filming all the scenes gives me more creative freedom when it comes to the editing.
Above is a screenshot from my second draft.
Reflective Comment:
While I was still happy with my first draft of the script, I feel that the small changes I have made were for the better. I also feel that I will change it again in the following weeks. I'm thinking about printing off the script and showing it people, and letting them say what they like and what they do not. This way I can get good feedback on what I need to change.
It's looking good. I think it's an excellent idea to get some audience feedback.
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